IELTS 10
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sending your homework. You finally remembered the best thing you did in Japan! haha :)
10. The most memorable vacation was when we went to the Japan.
>> 10. The most memorable vacation I had was when we went to Japan.
Because, it was the first time that my whole family go to abroad.
>> It is because it was the first time that my whole family went abroad.
Especially, the hotel\'s traditonal Japanese spa was really great. I could spa seeing the pond.
>> The hotel\'s traditonal Japanese spa was really great. I could use the spa while looking at the pond.
Also, going to the chocolate factory was the best experience.
>> Correct.
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