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When I was a freshman in college, I was thinking about my major. At the time my sister gave me some advice.
She says \"you choose what you are interested in. This makes it easy to study in the future and choose a job later. I have seen some of my friends regret not doing so ore change their major later.\"
After heard that, I choose my major in health science and later worked as a health researcher.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]. Thank you for this. It is indeed easier to do something you are interested in. You even tend to be a bit more passionate in it. Good for you!
- T. Beth
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When I was a freshman in college, I was thinking about my major. >>> correct
At the time my sister gave me some advice.
>>> At the time, my sister gave me some advice. She says \"you choose what you are interested in. This makes it easy to study in the future and choose a job later. I have seen some of my friends regret not doing so ore change their major later.\"
>>> She said, \"You should choose what you are interested in. This makes it easy to study in the future and choose a job later. I have seen some of my friends regret not doing so or change their major later.\"
After heard that, I choose my major in health science and later worked as a health researcher.
>>> After hearing that, I chose my major in health science and later worked as a health researcher.
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