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Say something about the tourism development in Korea, services and the effect on environment? In the past Tourism in Korea was base on tourist attraction. such as Je-Ju island, beautiful beach, and other beautiful nature. but resent Tourism in Korea has been changed. These days Korea Tourism is based on Korea culture and the knowledge industry. For example, K-pop has become very famous these days. Because of Kan-Nam style many foreigner has been visiting Kan-Nam in seoul. and I heard that Korea medical technology and services is better compare to other Asian country. So Many foreigner also visit Korea to take medical services. and cosmetic surgery also

Hello Mr. [Name]! ^^ Thanks for posting your answer ehre for me to undertand better you idea. Just review the corrections I have written below and I hope that I was able to help. I hope that you\'ll have a very nice holiday. Have time to rest! ^^ I\'ll see you again on Friday! Always, Kathrine ^^   Say something about the tourism development in Korea, services and the effect on environment?In the past Tourism in Korea was base on tourist attraction. such as Je-Ju island, beautiful beach, and other beautiful nature. >> In the past, tourism in Korea was based on tourist attractions such as Je-Ju island, beautiful beaches and other beautiful secenery of the nature. but resent Tourism in Korea has been changed. >> But resently, tourism in Korea has been changing. These days Korea Tourism is based on Korea culture and the knowledge industry. >> These days, tourism in Korea is based on it\'s culture and industry. For example, K-pop has become very famous these days. >> CORRECTBecause of Kan-Nam style many foreigner has been visiting Kan-Nam in seoul. >> Because of Kan-Nam/Gangnam Style, many foreigners have been visiting Kan-Nam/Gangnam in Seoul. and I heard that Korea medical technology and services is better compare to other Asian country. >> And I heard that Korea\'s medical technologies and services are better compared to other Asian countries. So Many foreigner also visit Korea to take medical services. and cosmetic surgery also >> So many foreigners also visit Korea to avail the medical services and even cosmetic surgery.