Ielts answer

Hi there Mr. [Name]!

Thanks for posting here your composition.

I hope that I as able to proof read it properly. ^^

If you have questions with regards to any of my corrections, just don\'t hesitate to tell me during our class.

I would appreciate it very well. 

Thank you! 

Always,

Kathrine ^^

Talk about your neighbor

I remember the Stefan\'s family.

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They\'re a small family having two kid.

Mr. [Name] is a professional soldier.

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He is a faithful person and he loves his family very much.

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His wife is an elementary school teacher.

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They are pride of their job

>> They are very proud of their job. 

They\'ve been taking care of their children very well.

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Their children are affable, very bright and self-confident.

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So the atmosphere of their family is always alive with chatter and laughter.

>> So the atmosphere in their family is always lively with chatter and laughter. 

>> My family likes them and they also like my family. 

When did you become neighbors?

We met in my church before.

>> We met in the church before. 

I belong to a Catholic church for foreigner who are staying in Korea.

>> I belong to a Catholic church for foreigners who are staying in Korea. 

We are volunteers in that church.

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I\'ve been leading band and chorus and He\'s been helping Africa friends in the church.