Ielts answer

Hi there again Mr. [Name]. 

Thanks again for this. 

Please have time to review the corrections below. 

And if you have any question, just don\'t hesitate to ask. 

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Kathrine ^^

How do we improve our neighbor

 I think having a conversation with our neighbor is best way to improve relationship with our neighbor.

>> I think that having a conversation with our neighbor is the best way to improve our relationship with them. 

 Through this we can share our thinking and mind with them.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: Through this, we can share our opinion/idea with them. 

and also we can find common interest.

>> And we can find also some common interest. 

>> We became close with our neighbor gradually by having a conversation with them. 

Where is the shopping center?

E-mart is famous for budget shopping center in Dae-Jeon.

>> CORRECT

It is located everywhere many people live in.

>> It is located anywhere where people live in. 

So my hometown also have it.

>> So my hometown also has it.

>> OR : So it is also in my hometown. 

I can find everything that I need there.

>> CORRECT

And price is resonable.

>> CORRECT (**spelling -reasonable)

How often do you go to the shopping center?

I go shopping only once a week.

>> CORRECT

To save time, I make a list of all the things that I need to buy.

>> CORRECT

Then, I go to the mall and but then.

>> Then I go to the mall and buy them. 

But sometimes, When I need to buy some important thing I used to drop by the mall unintentionally.

>> But sometimes, when I need to buy some important things, I used to drop by in the mall unintentionally.