Ielts answer

This is my final hello. kkk

Hi there again Mr. [Name]!

Anyway, this is my last correction.
I\'m so sorry that I\'m so late in proof reading all your corrections. haha.

Anyway, just see the corrections below. 

See you tomorrow! 

Always,

Kathrine ^^

Why do you often go to it and what are its characteristics?

I usually go shopping once a week.

>> CORRECT

E-mart is very convenient.

>> CORRECT

because it has well-appointed facility such as large parking lot, resting place, and restaurant.

>> Because it has a well-appointed/established facilities such as parking lot, resting place, and restaurants. 

So I can solve everything that I need at a time.

>> CORRECT

Will smaller shops survive in the current business system?

It looks like iT diffcult for small market to survive in the current business system.

>> It looks like it is difficult for small markets to survive in the current business system. 

Because big shopping mall that is based on huge capital have more competitiveness than small market. 

>> Because big shopping malls which are based on huge capital are more competitive than small amrkets. 

 They can provide customer with chipper and good quality products and they can also serve various amenities.  such as theater, restaurant, cultural facilities

>> They can provide customers with cheaper and good quality products and they can also serve various amenities such as theater, restaurants, and cultural facilities. 

Because of these reasons. Korea government is carrying out a policy to protect small shop.

>> Because of these reasons, the government is carrying out a policy to protect small shops. 

To revitalize small markets, Every second and forth weekend major big market should close.

>> To revitalize small markets, big markets should be closed every second (2nd) and fourth (4th) week of the month.