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Where do you think do most people spend their free time? I believe people spend their free time just as the way I do. I always visit the gym or ride a bike during my free time. Outdoor activity makes us feel batter and is a good way to release our stress. These days Korean people tend to be reluctant to do outdoor activity. because of smart phone, video game, TV Then, Lack of outdoor activity can cause health problems. When do people have free time in your country? Is it during holidays and weekends only? People in my country usually have their free time during weekend and during summer vacations. Some people are allowed to use day-off once a month. but that is available only for emplyees who belong to a large enterprise

Hello there again Mr. [Name]! Don\'t forget to review the corrections given below.Sometimes you tend to forget to capitalize the first word in a sentence. Or you unnecessarily capitalize words which are not proper nouns. So be careful next time. Also with the use of spelling, prepositions and articles. Once again, thank you! ^^   Always, Kathrine   Where do you think do most people spend their free time? I believe people spend their free time just as the way I do. >> CORRECT >> OR: I believe that people spend their free time just as I do. I always visit the gym or ride a bike during my free time. >> CORRECTOutdoor activity makes us feel batter and is a good way to release our stress. >> CORRECT (**spelling-better) >> OR: Outdoor activity makes me feel better and it is a good way to release me/our stress. These days Korean people tend to be reluctant to do outdoor activity. because of smart phone, video game, TV >>  These days, Koreans tend to be reluctant to do outdoor activities because of smartphones, video games, and the TV. Then, Lack of outdoor activity can cause health problems. >> And so, the lact fof outdoor activity can cause health problems. When do people have free time in your country? Is it during holidays and weekends only? People in my country usually have their free time during weekend and during summer vacations. >>Koreans/People in my country usually have their free time during the weekend or during teh summer vacation. Some people are allowed to use day-off once a month. >> Some people are allowed to use a day-off once a month. but that is available only for emplyees who belong to a large enterprise >> CORRECT (**capitalization-But)