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What scenery is the most beautiful for you? The most beautiful scenery I've seen is Nayagara fall. I've been to the U.S twice. On my second visit, I've been there for sightseeing. It's really nice and it has a lovely view. I enjoyed the beautiful sight and I was overwhelmed by huge spout of water from fall. Where did you see it? The Nayagara fall is located near the border between Canada and U.S. To go there, I needed to go through immigration Canada Practically, I've been to Canada also. Who did you go with? I went to there with my previous colleague. I eagerly wanted to go there with my family. I wanted to give my family member that impression. It is not important where we go for sightseeing but who go for sightseeing with.

And here is my last correction. haha Anyway, I always want to commend you for posting you composition here. It shows that you really are willing to learn something new. So thank you so much. Anyway, I wish you luck in your work today. And take care!   Always, Kathrine   What scenery is the most beautiful for you?The most beautiful scenery I\'ve seen is Nayagara fall. >> CORRECT (***Niagara falls)I\'ve been to the U.S twice. >> CORRECT >> OR: I\'ve been to US twice. On my second visit, I\'ve been there for sightseeing. >> CORRECT  It\'s really nice and it has a lovely view. >> It was really nice and it has a lovely view. I enjoyed the beautiful sight and I was overwhelmed by huge spout of water from fall. >> I enjoyed the beautiful sight and I was overwhelmed by the huge spout of water from the falls. Where did you see it? The Nayagara fall is located near the border between Canada and U.S. >> The Niagara falls is located between the border of Canada nad U.S. To go there, I needed to go through immigration Canada>> To go there, I needed to go to the immigration in Canada. Practically, I\'ve been to Canada also. >> I\'ve also been to Canada practically.   Who did you go with? I went to there with my previous colleague. >> I went there with my previous colleague.  I eagerly wanted to go there with my family. >> CORRECT I wanted to give my family member that impression. >> CORRECT (**family members-plural) >> oR: I wanted to give impresson to my family members.  It is not important where we go for sightseeing but who go for sightseeing with. >> It si not important where we go  for teh sightseeing but whom we are with during the sighseeing.