IELTS answer

Do you think the sceneries and historic objects of one country should be conserved? Yes of course. It is very important to conserve the scenery and historic objects of one country. Because this will remind us of our history and traditions. There is a saying History is repeating it self. We can learn historical reasons from there and we can prepare our future. How will the people preserve nature? I thing the best way to preserve nature is to make there as conservation area of nature. That is the fastest way to conserve the special zones. If we make special zones as a conservation area of nature, Employment manager will manage that area. But People won't be able to visit there easily because of conservation of nature.

A great Tuesday morning to you Mr. [Name]! ^^ Thanks for sharing your thoughts and your composition here. Please check the corrections below. And if you have clarificvations, just don\'t hesiatte to tell me during our class. Thank you!   Always, Kathrine ^^     Do you think the sceneries and historic objects of one country should be conserved?Yes of course. >> CORRECT It is very important to conserve the scenery and historic objects of one country. >> CORRECT Because this will remind us of our history and traditions. >> CORRECTThere is a saying History is repeating it self. >> There is a saying that \'history repeats itself.\'We can learn historical reasons from there and we can prepare our future. >> CORRECT >> OR DO YOU MEAN: We can learn historical lessons from it and so we can prepare for our fure. How will the people preserve nature? I thing the best way to preserve nature is to make there as conservation area of nature. >> CORRECT >> OR: I think that the best way to preserve nature is to make a natural conservatory are.  That is the fastest way to conserve the special zones. >> CORRECT >> OR: This the best way to conserve the specialize zones.  If we make special zones as a conservation area of nature, Employment manager will manage that area. >>  If we make special zones as a conservatory area, an employment manager will manage it. But People won\'t be able to visit there easily because of conservation of nature. >> But people will not be able to visit there easily because it\'s highly stricted for the conservation of the nature.