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What do you usually do in your free time? During my free time, I usually enjoy my hobbies. I have several hobbies. During the weekday, I go to the gym after finishing my work or ride a bike to care my bleed pressure level. and early in the morning I used to study English. How much time do you usually spend on your hobbies? I've been trying to exercise at least one hour everyday. To take care of my health, I have no choice but to enjoy exercise as my hobby. Who do you like to spend your leisure time with? I want to spend my leisure time with my family. Family is the most important thing in my life. So I would like to share leisure time with my family members. And more, Having same hobby is a good way to have good relationship with family . If we have same hobby with our family members, We can have a common interest. and We can have a better chance of having a conversation gradually.

An awesome 1st week of September! I hope that you are starting your week right. And I knwo you are. ^^ Anyway, here is my correction to your answers in your book. Hope I was able to help. I\'ll see you tomorrow! Thank you!   Always, Kathrine ^^     What do you usually do in your free time?During my free time, I usually enjoy my hobbies. >> CORRECT I have several hobbies. >> CORRECT During the weekday, I go to the gym after finishing my work or ride a bike to care my bleed pressure level.>> Every weekdays, I go to the gym after finishing my work or I ride a bike to take care of my blood pressure level. and early in the morning I used to study English.>> And early in the morning, I use to study English. How much time do you usually spend on your hobbies?I\'ve been trying to exercise at least one hour everyday. >> CORRECt >> OR: I am trying to exercise at least an hour a day. To take care of my health, I have no choice but to enjoy exercise as my hobby.>>  CORRECT Who do you like to spend your leisure time with?I want to spend my leisure time with my family. >> CORRECTFamily is the most important thing in my life. >> CORRECT So I would like to share leisure time with my family members. >> So I would like to share my liesure time with them/my family members. And more, Having same hobby is a good way to have good relationship with family . >> And one more thing, having the same hobby is a good way to have a good relationship with the family. If we have same hobby with our family members, We can have a common interest. >> If we have the same hobby with our family members, we can have a common interest.  and We can have a better chance of having a conversation gradually. >> And we gradually  have  a better chance if having a  good conversation.