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My favorite program is the evening news program. through it, I learn a lot about what is going on in my country. Aside from knowing, I also get updated on the latest event around the world. Sometimes When I feel down, I used to watch comedy program. I love to watch comedy program, running man. It's very humorous and It makes me smile. There are different charsacters in that shows. Each character has different humors and features. They make humor through combination of their characters. That show makes me crazy. Do you like programs or shows from other countries as well? If so, what kind? I like watching movies in movie theaters where the screens are bigger and the sound effects, better When I go to theater, I usually choosed other country movie. especially Holy wood. because Amarican movies have bigger scale from huge capital. It can maximaze the effect of theater. When I watch big scale moves in a movie theater, It feels as if the scenes are really happining in front of me

Hi there again Mr. [Name]! I\'m sorry for the late corrections. I also gave many things to attend to. So I please bear with me. haha. Here are my corrections for today. And please be careful when to capitalize or not. See you!   Always, Kathrine   My favorite program is the evening news program. >> CORRECT  through it, I learn a lot about what is going on in my country. >>   CORRECT (**capitalization) >> OR:  I am learning a lot of news about what is going on in my country through it. Aside from knowing, I also get updated on the latest event around the world. >> Aside from knowing about the local news, I can alos be updated about the latest events around the world.Sometimes When I feel down, I used to watch comedy program. >> CORRECT (**capitalization)  I love to watch comedy program, running man. >> I love to watch a comedy program entitled Runnign Man. It\'s very humorous and It makes me smile. >> It\'s evry humourous and it makes me smile. There are different charsacters in that shows. >> There are different characters in the show.  Each character has different humors and features. >> CORRECT They make humor through combination of their characters. >> They make humor through the combination of their characters. That show makes me crazy. >> CORRECT (or-The show...)   Do you like programs or shows from other countries as well?If so, what kind? I like watching movies in movie theaters where the screens are bigger and the sound effects, better >> I like watching movies in the movie theather where the screens are bigger and the sound effects are betterWhen I go to theater, I usually choosed other country movie. especially Holy wood. >> When I go to the theater, I usually choose foreign movies, especially Hollywood films. because Amarican movies have bigger scale from huge capital. >> Because American movies have movies have bigger scale of huge capital.  It can maximaze the effect of theater. >> It cam maximize the effect in the theater. When I watch big scale moves in a movie theater, It feels as if the scenes are really happining in front of me >> When I watch big scale actions in the movie theater, it feels like the scenes are really happening in front of me.