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No, I don't have a pet. and I don't want to live with any animal in the same building where I live. I can't tolerate that dog hair are falling out all over the house and It is terrible of their smell. I can't stand to live any animal. Although I don't want to have ant pets, My children really want to have pets. Especially dog. They are always pestering me to buy dog. So I told to my children. "OK. Let's make a promise with me. You've been saying that If I buy you pet, you would keep the pet yourself without my help. So I'd like to give you test. I will buy you hamsters. and If you take care of hamsters well, I promise to buy you dog." So, I had a chance to have pets in my house. Of course, They failed to keep the hamsters. Most people in Korea who have pets usually rasise little dog. Because they can feel companionship and that is a good way to solve loneness. Another reason is that dogs are very royal and work with kids very well compare to other animal.

One last hello Mr. [Name]! You know very well how to compose and organize your thoughts. Youa re really good at that. It shows through your compositions. So keep it up if not level it up. Anyway, again be more careful with the use of capitalization and unncessary punctuation marks. Thank you once again. ^^   Always, Kathrine      No, I don\'t have a pet. >> CORRECT  and I don\'t want to live with any animal in the same building where I live. >> CORRECT (***capitalization) I can\'t tolerate that dog hair are falling out all over the house and It is terrible of their smell. >> I can\'t tolerate that dog hars are fraiiling our all over the house and their smell is terrible.  I can\'t stand to live any animal.>> I can\'t stand to live with animals. Although I don\'t want to have ant pets, My children really want to have pets.  Especially dog. >> Although I son\'t want to ahve any pets, my children really want to have a pet especially a dog. They are always pestering me to buy dog. >> They are always pestering me to buy a dog. So I told to my children. \"OK. Let\'s make a promise with me. >> So I told them, \"OK. Let\'s have a deal.\" You\'ve been saying that If I buy you pet, you would keep the pet yourself without my help. >> You\'ve been telling me that I wuill buy you a pet, you will take care of it without my help. So I\'d like to give you test. >> So I\'d like to give you a test. I will buy you hamsters.>> CORRECT and If you take care of hamsters well, I promise to buy you dog.\">> And if you will take care of the hamster very well, I promise to buy you a dog. So, I had a chance to have pets in my house. >>  CORRECT >> OR: So i had a chance to have pets at home. Of course, They failed to keep the hamsters. >> CORRECT (**capitalization)Most people in Korea who have pets usually rasise little dog. >>  CORRECT (**spelling-raisez0 >> OR: Koreans usually raise little dogs as their pet. Because they can feel companionship and that is a good way to solve loneness. >> Because they can feel the companionship which  is a good way to solve loneliness. Another reason is that dogs are very royal and work with kids very well compare to other animal. >> Another reason is that dogs are very loyal and it is also working very well with kids comparing to other animals.