IELTS Answer

Where did you spend the last holiday? Last year, I went to Sal-Ak mountain with my wife's company members. You know my wife has been working as a social worker. She has been taking care of victims of sexual violence. There is no men in the institute where she is working. So, To go on a camp, They need men's help. That is because I accompanied with them. Actually, I didn't want to spend my holiday like that. I can have only one vacation 3days 4nights in a year. My wife asked me to spend my vacation as a volunteer. "Oh, My godness. How can I handle this matter? Indeed, Can I win my wife? That's impossible." And more, I don't have confidence to face my wife's nagging. Finally, I can find myself climbing the mountain. Do you like spending holidays alone or with others? I strongly believe that It is not important where we go for the sightseeing but whom we are with during the sightseeing So, I love to spend my holidays with my family.

A beautiful Wednesday morning to you Mr. [Name]. It\'s nice to read your composition once again. hahaha I\'m not used in not reading any of your writings. Anyway, here are my corrections. Please have time to review and if you have clarifications, just tell me during our class. The good thing is you are inculcationg all the corrections I am giving you in the next class we have so good job on that. You keep it up! See you tomorrow!   Always, Kathrine ^^     Where did you spend the last holiday? Last year, I went to Sal-Ak mountain with my wife\'s company members. >> correct! You know my wife has been working as a social worker.>> correct! She has been taking care of victims of sexual violence. >> She has been taking care of the victims of sexual violence. There is no men in the institute where she is working. >> correct!So, To go on a camp, They need men\'s help. >> So to go in a camp, they need men\'s help. >> OR: So to go out for a camping, they need a man\'s help. That is because I accompanied with them. >>  That is why I accompanied them. Actually, I didn\'t want to spend my holiday like that. >> correct!  I can have only one vacation 3days 4nights in a year. >> I can only have one vacation for 4 days and 3 nights in a  year. My wife asked me to spend my vacation as a volunteer. >> correct!\"Oh, My godness. >> correct! How can I handle this matter? >> correct! Indeed, Can I win my wife? >> Indeed, can I win over my wife? That\'s impossible.\">> corerct!And more, I don\'t have confidence to face my wife\'s nagging. >> correct! >> An one more thing, I don\'t have the confidence the face my nagging wife. Finally, I can find myself climbing the mountain.>>  correct! >> OR: Finally, I found myself climbing the mountain. Do you like spending holidays alone or with others?I strongly believe that It is not important where we go for the sightseeing but whom we are with during the sightseeing >> I strongly believe taht it is not important where to go for sightseeing but it is with whom we are spending it during the sightseeing. So, I love to spend my holidays with my family. >>  correct!