IELTS answer

A great morning Mr. [Name]!

Here are my corrections in your composition for the answers in your book. 
And if you have further questions, just tell me tomorrow. 

I\'ll see you!

Have a great day ahead! 

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

What stresses you out?

My biggest stress comes from my company.

>> correct!

>> or: My biggest stress comes from my work in the company. 

I\'m always under a lot of stress when I work.

>> correct

I like my job because my one is stable job.

>> I like my job because it is a stable one. 

So, I can find other position easily.

>> correct!

And I can keep working as long as my health permits

>> correct! 

But, When I work, I\'m always exposed to stressful situation.

>> But when I am working, I\'m always exposed to stressful situations.  

When the elevator malfunctions, The apartment tenants give me strong language.

>> When the elevator malfunctions, the apartments tenants say strong languages. 

\"Why this elevator malfunctions so often?\"

>> correct!

Even though that was a first malfunction.

>> Even though it was the first time to malfunction. 

\"Because of you, I climbed up very high stair.

>>  Because of you, I have to climb the very high stairs. 

So How can you pay my hardship.\"

>> correct!

>> or: So how are you going to pay my hardships.

I think exercise is a good way to solve the stress.

>> I think to exercise is a good way to solve stress. 

>> or: I think exercising  is a good way to solve stress.

I\'ve heard from some media If our body is exhausted , They said that we can\'t concern our stress.

>> I heard from some media that if our body is exhausted, they said that we cannot concentrate on our stress. 

Because our brain is very simple, If our body feels tired, our brain have no energy to think about our stress.

>> Because our brain is very simple, and if our body feels tired, our brain has no energy to think about our stress. 

Because of this, we can relieve stress.

>> Because of this, we can relieve our stress. 

Right, I totally agree with that.

>> correct! 

After exercise, I can feel better and I can forget about my daily stress.

>> After exercising, I feel better and I forget about my daily stress.