IELTS answer

2013-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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How does stress affect you? I know, Stress cause bad effect to our health. A lot of disease come from stress. and I'm also affected by stress. When I get stress from my job, my problem. I feel angry, and feel frustrated. But I'm trying not to be exposed from stress myself. What are some positive and negative ways that people deal with stress? Some people deal with stress in negative ways like throwing things, taking alcohol, and kicking something, yelling out But those are not a good way to handle their one. People need to find their own way to solve their stress.

강사 첨삭

Good morning again Mr. [Name]. 

Well, I agree.

Every people has it\'s own way to deal with stress. 

And each also has it\'s own choice on what way to do.
The good thing their is you chose the good way on how to handle your stress. 

Isn\'t it? 

Thanks again! 


Always,

Kathrine ^^


How does stress affect you?


I know, Stress cause bad effect to our health.

>>  I know that stress causes bad effect to our health. 

A lot of disease come from stress.

>> A lot of diseases come from stress. 

and I\'m also affected by stress.

>>  correct!

>> or: And I\'m also affected with it. 

 When I get stress from my job, my problem. I feel angry, and feel frustrated. 

>> When I am stressed out from my problems, I feel angry and frustrated. 

But I\'m trying not to be exposed from stress myself. 

>> But I\'m trying myself not to be exposes out from stress. 


What are some positive and negative ways that people deal with stress?


Some people deal with stress in negative ways like throwing things, taking alcohol, and kicking something, yelling out

>> Some people deal with stress in negative ways like throwing things, drinking alcohol, kicking someone or yelling out. 

But those are not a good way to handle their one.

>> But those are not the good ways to handle their stress. 

People need to find their own way to solve their stress.

>> correct! 

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