IELTS answer

I know a little bit about my culture. By the way, I can realize that my country's culture has been changed rapidly. For example, A funeral has been changed rapidly now. Growing number of Korean prefer cremation to burial, reflecting the rapid change of funeral culture. What do you think is interesting about your culture? We have some special festival. The biggest traditional event in Korea is Chuseok. It is Korean thanks giving day. It is a three-day holiday celebrated in September. We celebrate Chuseok to honor our ancestors. All Koreans celebrate this festival with their families. What are the most important values of your culture? It's too hard to answer. I'd like to say the most important values of my culture is passion and hard-working. For example, none are more interested in their children's education than Korean parents. Most Korean parents are willing to sacrifice their life and enjoyment. This fact represents Korean

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I know a little bit about my culture.

>> correct!

By the way, I can realize that my country\'s culture has been changed rapidly.

>> By the way, I realized that my country\'s culture has been changed rapidly. 

For example, A funeral has been changed rapidly now.

>> For example, funeral rituals has been changed rapidly now.  

Growing number of Korean prefer cremation to burial, reflecting the rapid change of funeral culture.

>>  Growing numbers of Koreans prefer cremation than burial which reflects the rapid change of funeral. 

What do you think is interesting about your culture?

We have some special festival.

>> We have some special festivals. 

The biggest traditional event in Korea is Chuseok.

>> correct!

It is Korean thanks giving day.

>> correct!

It is a three-day holiday celebrated in September.

>> It is a three-day holiday celebrated on September. 

We celebrate Chuseok to honor our ancestors.

>> correct!

All Koreans celebrate this festival with their families.

>> correct!

What are the most important values of your culture?

It\'s too hard to answer.

>> correct!

I\'d like to say the most important values of my culture is passion and hard-working.

>>  I\'d like to say that the most important values of my culture is passion and hard-working. 

 For example, none are more interested in their children\'s education than Korean parents.

>>  correct!

Most Korean parents are willing to sacrifice their life and enjoyment.

>> correct!

This fact represents Korean

>> correct!