IELTS answer

Hello Mr. [Name]!

hope you are having a great day today. 

I\'m so sorry about the late correction. 

Hope you understand.
Anyway, here are my corrections below. 

And if you have questions or clarifications, just tell me during our class.

Thank you. 

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

Do you think \"When in Rome do as the Romans do\" is always good advice?

Yes. We need to follow other country\'s culture when we visit there.

>> correct!

We respect other country\'s culture as well.

>> correct!

>> We have to be careful not to make rude comments with regards to something which may be perfectly normal to them but is very unusual to use. 

What kind of government do you have?

In my country, There are some good things and bad things about living in my country.

>> There are some good and bad things about living in my country. 

Good thing is that my country\'s decisions are based on democracy.

>> The good thing is that my country\'s decisions are based on democracy. 

So, when we have to decide important matter or important position, we use election.

>>  So when we have to decide on important matter or important decision, we use the election. 

Elections are the most important way for people to practice democracy.

>> Election is the most powerful way for people to practice democracy. 

Bad things are that irregularities and corruption are prevalent in political circles.

>> The bad thing is that irregularities and corruption is prevalent in the political circle. 

Corruption is eating away at our country.

>> correct!

So, many people so tired of crooked politicians.

>> So many people are sop tired of crooked politicians