IELTS answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Here are my corrections for your answers below.
Hope I was able to help you Mr. [Name].
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Kathrine
How are government officials chosen in your country?
As a democratic country, we are free to decide who will be the leader we want to be in a position.
>> correct!
>> Election is the most important way for the people to practice democracy.
How interested are you in politics?
Some times, I pay attention to the special event.
>> correct!
like president election important government issue.
>> Like the presidential election or an important government issue.
Do you think it is important for a country to have a strong military?
I think it\'s hard to consider a nation being powerful in the world without both economic and military way.
>> I think it\'s hard to consider a nation being so powerful in the world without both its economic and military ways.
and balance beteen economic and military is very important.
>> And a balance between the economic and military is very important.
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