IELTS answer.

Hello there Mr. [Name]! 

It\'s another week to endure. kkk 

Anyway, thanks for doing you compositions. 

Maybe you were just lingering on your holiday and you say all your homeworks that is why you have. 
But of course, I appreciate it a lot. 

So thank you for spending your time doing these two homeworks. 

I\'ll see you then again tomorrow. 

Enjoy the rest of the day. 

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

Have you ever wanted something so badly that would anything to get it?

I know that getting everything I want cannot be done.

>> correct!

I have so many things that I achieve before I die. 

>> I have so many things to achieve before I die. 

I want to make my 3st music album and go to Australia and have steady job there.

>> I want to make my 1st (3rd) music album and go to Australia and have/ to have a steady job there. 

And I also want to have my own studio for my music work.

>> correct!

But I know that It is impossible to achieve those at one time and without effort.

>> But I know that it is impossible to achieve those at once and without doing any effort.

>> or: But I know it is impossible to 

>>  So I am always trying to get information on how I can achieve my dream and how I can make it. 

What are the things that you desire most?

These days, The thing that I desire most is to get a job in Australia.

>> These days, the thing that I desire the most is to get a job in Australia. 

There is a big my company head quarter in Australia Sydney.

>> There is a head quarter of my company in Sydney, Australia. 

I am planing to appay to there next year.

>> I am planning to apply there next year. 

So I\'ve been trying to prepare now. studying English, and Getting the information about the elevator field in there.   

>>  So I am trying to prepare now through studying English and getting information about the elevator field there.