IELTS answer

One last hello Mr. [Name]! ^^

Well, I know that you are going to achieve your dream because you are working hard for it. 

I am pretty sure of that. 

You are working very hard for it.

I have one quote from a movie that I watched before. 

It\'s an animation entitled Happy Feet 2. 

According to the mighty Sven in the movie, 

\"If you want it, you must will it, If you will it, it will be yours.\" 

You are that person Mr. [Name] so don\'t worry to much. 

Hope this quote helps you think all over again. 

See you tomorrow! 

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

As I mentioned earlier, I\'ve been keep trying now.

>> As I mentioned earlier, I\'ve been trying to keep it now. 

And I know someone who are in high position my company.

>>  And I know someone who is in a high position in my company. 

He is foreigner who come from Germany head quarter.

>> He is a foreigner who came from the head quarter in Germany. 

He is a strong candidate next Korea branch CEO.

>> He is a strong candidate to be the next CEO in Korea branch. 

We met before to test my safety procedure.

>> correct!

At that time I leave strong impression to him with my good test result.

>> At that time, I left a strong impression to him with my good test result. 

So, I have a plan to ask him pieces of advice and reference. 

>> So I have a plan to ask him pieces of advice and references. 

How did you feel after you received or attained the things that you desire?

I got more confident and believed more that I could do all the things that I want.

>> I got more confidence and a belief that I could do all the things that I want. 

>> or: I became more confident and I believe that I  could do all the things that I want. 

Well, I started thinking about new goals to achieve.

>> correct!

Without goal, I can\'t get motivation. 

>> Without a goal, I can\'t have a motivation. 

Every goal in life is directed towards my happiness and satisfaction.

>> correct!

But, In my case I eagerly want to achieve my dream with my family.

>> But in my case, I eagerly want to achieve my dream with my family. 

The reason why I keep on trying is to make my family happy.

>>  correct!

 So If my family became miserable because of my dream.  I am willing to forgive my dream. 

>> So if my family is going to be miserable because of my dream, I am willing to give up on my dream.