IELTS answer

2013-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What do you consider essential in the management of people? A leader is someone who has a vision for the future. They need to have passion. I think they need to make people want to achieve the necessary goals. A leader have to present goal to their members everytime and every situation. And also a leader understands people and helps them do their best for the team. So I consider vision and understanding team as the best elements

강사 첨삭

A great Monday morning and the last day of the month to you Mr. [Name]! ^^

I hope that all you goals and plan for this month were all achieved and finished. 

Hopefully. ^^

Anyway, a good leader not only leads hi members but also listens to his member suggestions. 

I think that is one of the elements in managing people. 

A good leader is also a good listener as they say. 

Anyway, thanks for this one. 

See you again tomorrow! 
Have a nice day ahead! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


What do you consider essential in the management of people?


A leader is someone who has a vision for the future.

>> correct! 

They need to have passion.

>> correct! 

I think they need to make people want to achieve the necessary goals.

>> correct! 

A leader have to present goal to their members everytime and every situation.

>> A leader has to present his goals to his members every time and in every situation. 

And also a leader understands people and helps them do their best for the team.

>> correct!

So I consider vision and understanding team as the best elements

>> So I consider the vision and understanding to his team as the best elements. 

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