IELTS answer
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A great Monday morning and the last day of the month to you Mr. [Name]! ^^
I hope that all you goals and plan for this month were all achieved and finished.
Hopefully. ^^
Anyway, a good leader not only leads hi members but also listens to his member suggestions.
I think that is one of the elements in managing people.
A good leader is also a good listener as they say.
Anyway, thanks for this one.
See you again tomorrow!
Have a nice day ahead!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What do you consider essential in the management of people?
A leader is someone who has a vision for the future.
>> correct!
They need to have passion.
>> correct!
I think they need to make people want to achieve the necessary goals.
>> correct!
A leader have to present goal to their members everytime and every situation.
>> A leader has to present his goals to his members every time and in every situation.
And also a leader understands people and helps them do their best for the team.
>> correct!
So I consider vision and understanding team as the best elements
>> So I consider the vision and understanding to his team as the best elements.
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