IELTS answer

2013-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Tell me something about your productivity and time management skills? Personally, I find the most important time is early in the morning. I am definitely a morning person. I can be focus on something early in the morning. Because I can do something without being disturbed early in the morning. Normally, When I have to make a important plan or study something, I used to make it early in the morning 5 am. Sometimes My friend ask me like this "Don't you feel tired during the day?" I answered like this "I have a secret. After lunch I enjoy taking a nap in my car 10 minutes or 15 minutes. It makes me energized." On the contrary to this, I can't concentrate in the evening because of fatigue. So I invest my evening time to exercise.

강사 첨삭

Hello once again Mr. [Name]! 

I think that reason that is why you  are always energetic everyday is because of your routine. 

And that is a good way for you to do everything that you want to do. 

Wow. You gave me an idea actually. hihihi. 

See you tomorrow! 
Thank you very much. ! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


Tell me something about your productivity and time management skills?


Personally, I find the most important time is early in the morning.

>> correct! 

I am definitely a morning person.

>>  correct! 

I can be focus on something early in the morning.

>>  I can focus on something early in the morning. 

Because I can do something without being disturbed early in the morning.

>> correct!

Normally, When I have to make a important plan or study something, I used to make it early in the morning 5 am. 

>> Normally, when I have to make an important plan or study something, I used to make it early in the morning at 5 am. 
Sometimes My friend ask me like this \"Don\'t you feel tired during the day?\"

>> Sometimes, my friend asks me like this, \"Don\'t you feel tired during the day?\" 

>> or: Sometimes, my friend asks me if don\'t I feel tired during during the day. 

I answered like this \"I have a secret.

>>  I answered like this, \" I have a secret. 

After lunch I enjoy taking a nap in my car 10 minutes or 15 minutes.

>> correct! 

It makes me energized.\"

>> correct! 

>> or: So I told him that my secret is I enjoy taking a nap for 10 to minutes in my car after lunch. 

On the contrary to this, I can\'t concentrate in the evening because of fatigue.

>> On contrary to this, I can\'t concentrate in the evening because of fatigue. 

So I invest my evening time to exercise.

>> So I invest my time in the evening exercising/ to exercise. 

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