IELTS answer
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello once again Mr. [Name]!
I think that reason that is why you are always energetic everyday is because of your routine.
And that is a good way for you to do everything that you want to do.
Wow. You gave me an idea actually. hihihi.
See you tomorrow!
Thank you very much. !
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Tell me something about your productivity and time management skills?
Personally, I find the most important time is early in the morning.
>> correct!
I am definitely a morning person.
>> correct!
I can be focus on something early in the morning.
>> I can focus on something early in the morning.
Because I can do something without being disturbed early in the morning.
>> correct!
Normally, When I have to make a important plan or study something, I used to make it early in the morning 5 am.
Sometimes My friend ask me like this \"Don\'t you feel tired during the day?\"
>> Sometimes, my friend asks me like this, \"Don\'t you feel tired during the day?\"
>> or: Sometimes, my friend asks me if don\'t I feel tired during during the day.
I answered like this \"I have a secret.
>> I answered like this, \" I have a secret.
After lunch I enjoy taking a nap in my car 10 minutes or 15 minutes.
>> correct!
It makes me energized.\"
>> correct!
>> or: So I told him that my secret is I enjoy taking a nap for 10 to minutes in my car after lunch.
On the contrary to this, I can\'t concentrate in the evening because of fatigue.
>> On contrary to this, I can\'t concentrate in the evening because of fatigue.
So I invest my evening time to exercise.
>> So I invest my time in the evening exercising/ to exercise.
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