IELTS answer.

2013-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Do you consider yourself an artist? I'm not good at fashion. I don't care how I dress. I just try to be shown smart to other person. I'm not artist about fahion but artist about music. What do you believe makes a quality article of clothing? I think it is all about the convenience and chip price good colour. Personally, I like wearing comfortable clothes such as jeans and T-shirts. I usually like clothes that are mmade of light material. I can't wear these clothes on special occasions. On such occasions, I like wearing clothes that are simple suit. How would you define your city's fashion? Actually, I have no idea about my city's dashion. But, I've heard that designer clothing is very popular in Korea and my city. A lot of people like wearing clothes with famous brand names. This is because such clothes are considered status symble, especially among young people. But, I don't want to waste my money to buy expansive clothes.

강사 첨삭

A fresh and invigorating midweek to you Mr. [Name]! (~.~)

I hope that you will be able to enjoy and have fun in your holiday. 

And I\'m sure you will. 

Anyway, here are my corrections on your answers in your book.

See you on Friday! 
Enjoy and take care too! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


Do you consider yourself an artist?


I\'m not good at fashion.

>> correct! 

I don\'t care how I dress.

>> correct! 

I just try to be shown smart to other person. 

>> I am just trying to show like I\'m a smart person to other people. 

I\'m not artist about fahion but artist about music.

>> I\'m not an artist when it comes to fashion but I\'m an artist when it comes to music. 


What do you believe makes a quality article of clothing?


I think it is all about the convenience and chip price good colour.

>> I think it is all about the convenience, cheap price and good color. 

Personally, I like wearing comfortable clothes such as jeans and T-shirts.

>> correct! 

>> or: I personally like wearing......

I usually like clothes that are mmade of light material. 

>> correct! (spelling- made)

I can\'t wear these clothes on special occasions.

>> correct!

On such occasions, I like wearing clothes that are simple suit.

>> correct! 


How would you define your city\'s fashion?


Actually, I have no idea about my city\'s dashion.

>>  correct! (spelling-fashion)

But, I\'ve heard that designer clothing is very popular in Korea and my city.

>> But I heard that designer clothes are very popular in Korea and in my city. 

A lot of people like wearing clothes with famous brand names.

>> correct!

This is because such clothes are considered status symble, especially among young people.

>> correct! (spelling-symbol)

But, I don\'t want to waste my money to buy expansive clothes.

>> correct! 

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