IELTS answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Such a wonderful Friday we all have today Mr. [Name]!^^
Though you had a tiring holiday, I am pretty sure that you still had fun it because you were with your family.
Isn\'t it? ^^
And though you will go to work tomorrow, I know that you will enjoy it because as what you have said, you will have a fre time to study English.
That\'s a good thing I think.
I mean, you are that your time will not be wasted.
Time is gold as they say.
Anyway, keep safe and enjoy your time during the weekend.
I\'ll see you on Monday!
God bless!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What kind of movie do you prefer to watch?
>> I like to watch a movie which really has a well-done story.
What is your favorite movie?
The film that impressed me the most was \"TaeGukGi\", which means \"the flag of Korea\".
>> correct!
It is about two brothers.
>> correct!
It showed how the Korean War affected their lives.
>> correct!
I like the film because it is realistic and show conflicts between the communism and the capitalism.
>> I like the film because it is realistic and it shows the conflicts communism and capitalism.
It had spectacular war scenes and visual effects.
>> It has spectacular war scenes and visual effects.
It was also able to show the effects of the war on the people of Korea.
>> correct!
Who is your favorite actor?
My favorite actor is Lee Byong-Hun.
>> correct!
His is the one of the popular actor in Korea.
>> He is one of the popular actors in Korea.
and He is active in the Hollywood now.
>> And he is also active in Hollywood now.
He get married lately.
>> He got married lately.
His private life was dirty with a lot of scandal.
>> His private life was dirty with a lot of scandals.
I don\'t like his private life but I like his challenging life.
>> correct!
He has been challenging always and trying new things.
>> He has always been challenging and trying new things.
So, I\'d like to live with continuous passion and challenge like him.
>> correct!
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