IELTS answer
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A happy morning Mr. [Name]!
And a roaring Monday!
It\'s good to know that though you still had a work last weekend, you were still productive since you made teh answers in your book and you were also able to watch an English animation.
So that\'s still very nice.
Anyway, here are my corrections for all your answers and thank you very much.
I\'ll see you again tomorrow!
Always have a great day!
Take care too!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Do you prefer your child to watch alone?
Of course not.
>> correct!
I don\'t want to allow my kid to watch alone because today\'s media is very harmful for kids.
>> correct! (plural-my kids)
>> correct! (capitalization)
What are the appliances you have at home?
A rice cooker, A refrigerator, A Television, A microwave etc.
>> I have a lot of appliances at home like rice cooker, refrigerator, television, microwave and etc.
The most important gadget that I have is my cellular phone.
>> correct!
When I work. I used cellular phone a lot.
>> When I am working, I use my cellular phone a lot.
For exmple, When I replace new materials, My customer always request some pictures that show precess replacing materials to confirm.
>> For example, when I replace new materials, my customers always request some pictures which shows the process in replacing the materials to confirm about it.
And more, I used to give and take some documents and pictures with my office and my co-wokers.
>> And more, I am using it to send and receive some documents from the office and my co-workers.
Smart phone make all these tasks easy.
>> correct!
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