IELTS answer

A great day to you Mr. [Name]! 

Thanks for sharing here your thoughts. 

I hope that this technological advances that you are in right now will make you feel better and will make your health okay. 

But of course, it does not also say that you/we are going to depend everything to technology.

We also have to do our part. 
And our part with regards to our health is to take care of it. 

We all have our own way on how to take care of ourselves, and i know you have one too. 

As I told you during our class, \"Health is wealth.\" 

It is also our own riches. 

So you take care of yourself Mr. [Name]. 

Anyway, I\'ll see you again tomorrow. 

Thank you very much. 
And thank you also for waiting. ^^

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

Do you think technology plays an important role?

Of course, technology makes our lives easier.

>> correct!  

Without technology I think we can\'t live anymore.

>> correct! 

There is nowhere don\'t use technology.

>> There is nowhere which is not using technology. 

Maybe we can\'t go office on time and we can\'t work without technology. 

>> Maybe, we can\'t go to the office on time and we can\'t work without using any technology. 

And more, Medical field has been using technology now.

>> correct! 

Lately I took a medical treatment in the hospital.

>> correct! 

The doctor said there is a little stone in your body.

>> The doctor said there is  a little stone in my body. 

>> or: The doctor sad, \" There is a little stone in your body.\" 

That stone have caused your pain.

>> That stone is causing you pain. 

we can call that disease as urolithiasis or bladder-stone. 

>>  correct! (capitalization-first word at beginning of the sentence)

 Before technology development. The operation was only way to get rid of your stone.

>> Before the technological development, undergoing an operation is the only way to get rid of your stone, 

But technological advances made operation unnecessary. 

>>  But technological advances made operations unnecessary.

We can cure your disease by using special machine.

>> We can cure your disease by using a special machine. 

This machine would impact your body to get rid off your stone by using supersonic waves. 

>> This machine would have an impact in your body to get rid off your stone by using supersonic waves. 

We won\'t be necessary to use mess because of technology.

>> It won\'t be necessary to use messy operations because of technology. 

So, technology have been played an important role in our life.

>> So technology has been playing an important role in our life.