IELTS Answer

A great Monday morning Mr. [Name]! 

I do hope you\'d get to start the week right.

And I know you do, you\'re going to have a right week.

I do also hope that you will achieve all the goals that you have mentioned.

I know that you will because that you have a strong drive to achieve such things. 
So go for it! 

See you again tomorrow! 
Have a nice day ahead! 

Always,

Kathrine ^^

What is your goal in life?

I have a lot of things that I want to do and achieve to

>> I have a lot of things that I want to do and to achieve. 

My short-term goal is to work other English-speaking country.

>>  My short-term goal is to work to an English-speaking country. 

My first wish is Australia and second wish is Canada.

>>  My first wish is in Australia and my second wish is in Canada. 

It\'s been my dream for a long time to work in Australia Sydney.

>> It\'s been my dream fro a long to work in Sydney, Australia. 

And I\'d like to settle Australia successfully.

>>  And I\'d like to settle in Australia successfully. 

My long-term goal is to have my personal music studio to compose music.

>> correct! 

To make my own music studio, Proper spaces and equipments are needed.

>> To have my own music studio, proper spaces and equipments are needed. 

 To prepare those things, I have to make a money also.

>>  To be prepared on those things, I also have to make money. 

>>  correct! 

I am always wondering where I be there after five years.

>>  Am always wondering where will I be after 5 years/ 

 As I mentioned earlier. My wish is to go to Australia and to work there.

>> As I mentioned earlier, my wish is to go to Australia and to work there. 

And I have a plan to go there next year.

>>  correct!