IELTS answer
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there once again Mr. [Name].
As what I have mentioned to you during our class, and you are correct, ambition is the strong drive to success.
But actually, without ambition, we cannot reach our goal.
Ambition is our drive to achieve success. To achieve our goal.
Ambition is the will to get something. To achieve things that we want to have.
Our goal is the achievement. The thing that we want to get.
So we need to have first ambition, our will, for us to achieve our goal.
Anyway, I will explain it further tomorrow if it\'s not yet clear.
See you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
It is obvious that none can know my future but It is free to have a dream.
>> correct! (capitalization)
>> or: It is obvious that nobody will know about our future and it is free to have a dream.
Maybe after five years I would be working in Australia Sydney.
>> Maybe after 5 years, I will be working in Sydney, Australia.
>> correct! (capitalization)
>> or: And my family will be trying to settle there very hard.
It is little bit difficult to describe.
>> correct!
A dictionary definition of goal is \"The state of affairs that a plan is intended to achieve and that terminates behavior intended to achieve it\"
>> The dictionary\'s definition of goal is \"The state of affairs that a plan is intended to achieve and that terminates behavior intended to achieve it\"
>> correct!
In my opinion, Ambition sounds stronger that goal and ambition is a more powerful effort than goal.
>> In my opinion, ambition sounds stronger than goal and it is a more powerful effort than goal.
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