IELTS answer

Do you think music spices up your life? Of course It has spiced up my life for a long time. I'd like to give my experiences as an example. When I am exercising in the gym or riding a bike. I used to listen to music during exercise. At that time I can feel that music is another source of energy for me. Sometime, I forgot to bring my earphone when I went to the gym. Everytime without music, I can feel huge differences between exercise with music and exercise without music. And more, In my work field, I often do repetition task. such as removing sundry, check oil situation. Sometimes, Doing these mindless work all day are driving me crazy. On all such occasions, I used to turn on music by using smartphone a little. Because I need to listen if the elevator make strange sounds. It helps me work efficiently and I can work without boring. Music really spices up my life.

Hurray hurray Wednesday! 

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. 

And I really agree that music spices up your life. 

And it\'s already a vital part in your life so you cannot get by without it. 

And of course, for a lot of people too. 

Music makes our life better. 

I think. ^^

See you again tomorrow. 

Have a great day ahead! 

Always, 

Kathrine ^^

Do you think music spices up your life?

Of course It has spiced up my life for a long time.

>> correct! (capitalization) 

I\'d like to give my experiences as an example.

>> correct! 

 When I am exercising in the gym or riding a bike. I used to listen to music during exercise. 

>> When I am exercising in the gym or riding a bike, I used to listen to music. 

At that time I can feel that music is another source of energy for me.

>> correct! 

Sometime, I forgot to bring my earphone when I went to the gym.

>>  Sometimes, I forget to bring my earphone when I go to the gym. 

Everytime without music, I can feel huge differences between exercise with music and exercise without music. 

>> Without the music, , I feel a huge difference between exercising with music or with music. 

And more, In my work field, I often do repetition task. such as removing sundry, check oil situation.

>> And in my field of work, I often do my tasks repetitively such as removing sundry, and checking oil situation. 

Sometimes, Doing these mindless work all day are driving me crazy.

>> correct! (capitalization) 

On all such occasions, I used to turn on music by using smartphone a little.

>> correct! 

Because I need to listen if the elevator make strange sounds.
>> Because I need to listen if the elevator is making a strange noise. 

It helps me work efficiently and I can work without boring.

>> It helps me work efficiently and I can work without being bored. 

Music really spices up my life.

>> correct!