IELTS answer

2013-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Could you tell me your full name? My name is [Name]-Yong An but my English name is Adriano. You can call me Adriano. Adriano is saint who actived in the Roman Era. Some of my friend often complain that your name is little bit difficult to pronounce. My English name is Catholic baptismal name. Some people ask me "Does your name have special meaning ?" Of course, my mane has special meaning. My Korea name Boo-Yong come from buddism. It's common buddism name in Korea. My grandfather gave me. And the reason why I name myself Adriano is expression about my resolution to follow Adriano's life. He is a martyr. He died for Jesus a long time ago. He lived passionate life and model life. How many members of your family do you have? There are four people in my family. My wife, myself and my two children. My wife has been working as a social worker. She has been taking care of victims of sexual violence. That's a very difficult profession. but she has a pride of her job.

강사 첨삭

An astonishing and enchanting Friday morning!!! ^o^

I hope that you will pour out your full energy today since it\'s the last day of the week. 

So for tomorrow, you will start and regain your energy again because of the activities that you are going to do tomorrow. 

And I am pretty sure that you will enjoy and have fun. 

Check the corrections for today\'s composition. 
Thank you very much for today  and for telling me the history of your name. ^^

Have fun and enjoy your weekend! 

Take care! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


Could you tell me your full name?


My name is [Name]-Yong An but my English name is Adriano.

>> correct! 

You can call me Adriano.

>> correct! 

Adriano is saint who actived in the Roman Era.

>>  Adriano is a saint who was active in the Roman era. 

Some of my friend often complain that your name is little bit difficult to pronounce.

>> Some of my friends often complain that my name is a little bit difficult to pronounce. 

My English name is Catholic baptismal name.

>>  My English name is a Catholic baptismal name. 

Some people ask me \"Does your name have special meaning ?\"

>> Some people ask me, \"Does your name have a special meaning?\"

Of course, my mane has special meaning.

>>  Of course, my name has a special meaning. 

My Korea name Boo-Yong come from buddism.

>> My Korean name is Boo-Yong which came from Buddhism. 

It\'s common buddism name in Korea.

>> Buddhism is a common name in Korea. 

My grandfather gave me.

>>  My grand father gave it me. 

And the reason why I name myself Adriano is expression about my resolution to follow Adriano\'s life.

>> And the reason why I named myself Adriano is because of the expression and my resolution to follow Adriano\'s life. 

He is a martyr.

>> correct! 

He died for Jesus a long time ago.

>>  correct! 

He lived passionate life and model life.

>>  He lived in a passionate life and a model life. 


How many members of your family do you have?


There are four people in my family.

>> correct!

>> or: There are four members in the family.  

My wife, myself and my two children.

>>  correct! 

My wife has been working as a social worker.

>> correct! 

She has been taking care of victims of sexual violence.

>>  correct! 

That\'s a very difficult profession.

>>  correct! 

but she has a pride of her job.

>> But she is proud of her job. 


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