Ielts answers
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Running
How often do you go for a run?
- I usually go for a run three times a week as a warming up before workout. I don’t spend much time to do running. I invest to do it for 15 mins only.
Where do you usually go running?
- I normally go running at a gym and use a treadmill as I can go for a run regardless of weather or surroundings. However,I used to go running at a park when I was in London.
Do you like running?
- Yes I do, running helps me to relieve my stress and to warm up my body. Therefore I always do running as a step of preparation before main exercise.
Do you think running is a good way to stay healthy?
-Absolutely, running helps us to burn our fat and unnecessary energy and to keep our body balance. In addition, it also improves our cardio-pulmonary function and blood circulation.
Do you like art?
-Definitely, I love art typically Impressionism and post- impressionism works. My favourite painters are Mone, Gogh Van, Renoir the representative artists of
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Running
How often do you go for a run?
- I usually go for a run three times a week as a warming up before workout. I don’t spend much time to do running. I invest to do it for 15 mins only.
>> Correct!
Where do you usually go running?
- I normally go running at a gym and use a treadmill as I can go for a run regardless of weather or surroundings. However,I used to go running at a park when I was in London.
>> - I normally go running at a gym and use a treadmill as I can go for a run regardless of the weather or surroundings. However, I used to go running at a park when I was in London.
Do you like running?
- Yes I do, running helps me to relieve my stress and to warm up my body. Therefore I always do running as a step of preparation before main exercise.
>> Yes I do, running helps me to relieve my stress and to warms up my body. Therefore I always (do running/ run) as a step of preparation before the main exercise.
Do you think running is a good way to stay healthy?
-Absolutely, running helps us to burn our fat and unnecessary energy and to keep our body balance. In addition, it also improves our cardio-pulmonary function and blood circulation.
>> -Absolutely, running helps us to burn our fats and unnecessary energy and to keep our body balanced. In addition, it also improves our cardio-pulmonary function and blood circulation.
Art
Do you like art?
-Definitely, I love art typically Impressionism and post- impressionism works. My favourite painters are Mone, Gogh Van, Renoir the representative artists of Impressionism.
>> Correct!
Have you ever visited an art gallery?
- Sure, I have visited many art galleries around the world. Among them, my favourite galleries are The National Gallery in London and Prado gallery in Madrid.
>> Sure, I have visited many art galleries around the world. Among them, my favourite galleries are The National Gallery in London and the Prado gallery in Madrid.
ls there any artwork on the wall in your room?
-Yes, I have some pieces of postcards and posters of impressionism artworks and they are hung on the wall in my room. They make my place brighter and more peaceful.
>> Correct!
Have you ever had art classes?
Yes, I had a private art class when I was 10 and I learned painting for 2 years. I enjoyed drawing but I didn’t have a talent of it .
>> Correct!
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