IELTS essay practice( Topic: All experimentation on animals must be banned?)

Scientific discoveries have greatly contributed to the high development of human\\\'s lives today. As part of the discoveries, animal experiments are inevitable procedures, particularly in the field of medicine. Although animal experiments raise issues over ethical concerns towards animals, it is very important to support them as much as possible for humans\' safety in health. Animal experimentation helps reduce the risk of potential side effects of medical products. In case a company releases a product without experimenting on the animals because of the law and only later the product is known to be dangerous for practical uses after people get sick, it will be humans who should sacrifice their health. Therefore, banning all experimentation on animals means animals\\\' rights are more important than people\\\'s rights. It is unjust for humans if animal rights are considered to be more important than human rights. (to be continued in the next one)