Ielts general module: Task1
학생이 쓴 원문
You have recently discovered that the tables and chairs of a cafe blocked the public\'s footpath.
Write a letter to the cafe manager. In your letter
- describe the problems
- suggest how you would like the problem solved
- tell him/her what you will do if they do not address the problem
Dear sir,
I am [이름] Choi and a resident of Avene Road where your cafe is located. I am writing to express my concern with your cafe.
As you know, The tables and chairs of your cafe occupied most part of the footpath. So many residents feel uncomfortable when they pass through the narrowed path and unsafe when they walk along the side of road instead of the footpath.
Therefore, I would like to suggest that you are going to reduce your furniture or relocate them to make space for the passers.
If you do not accept this suggestions or tell us other ideas to solve this problem, I would reserve the right of further complaint.
Please, give this matter your immediate attention.
Your faithfully,
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Here are my correction.
I am [이름] Choi and a resident of Avene Road where your cafe is located. I am writing to express my concern with your cafe.
>>I am [이름] Choi and a resident of Avenue Road where your cafe is located. I am writing to express my concern about your cafe.
As you know, The tables and chairs of your cafe occupied most part of the footpath. So many residents feel uncomfortable when they pass through the narrowed path and unsafe when they walk along the side of road instead of the footpath.
As you know, The tables and chairs of your cafe occupied most part of the footpath. So many residents feel uncomfortable when they pass through the narrowed path and unsafe when they walk along the side of road instead of the footpath.
>>As you know, the tables and chairs of your cafe occupied the footpath. There are so many residents who feel uncomfortable when they pass through the narrow path and unsafe when they walk along the side of the road instead of the footpath.
Therefore, I would like to suggest that you are going to reduce your furniture or relocate them to make space for the passers.
Therefore, I would like to suggest that you are going to reduce your furniture or relocate them to make space for the passers.
>>Correct!
If you do not accept this suggestions or tell us other ideas to solve this problem, I would reserve the right of further complaint.
If you do not accept this suggestions or tell us other ideas to solve this problem, I would reserve the right of further complaint.
>>If you do not accept this suggestion or tell us other ideas to solve this problem, I deserve the right for further complaint.
Please, give this matter your immediate attention.
Please, give this matter your immediate attention.
>>Correct!
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