ielts part 1&3
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Did you enjoy singing when you were younger?
Yes, absolutely. I was completely into singing songs when I was a teenager. At least, I went to a karaoke every other day.
2. How often do you sing now?
I usually go to a karaoke when I want to sing a song as it is allowed to make noise there. But I hum every day at home or a private place.
3. Do you have a favorite song you like listening to? 
Definitely, my favorite song is ‘ shallow’ which is the movie OST of “A Star is bone”. Main actors Bradly cooper and lady gaga sing it in the film.

4. How important is singing in your culture?
I think singing is a paramount entertainment in South Korea. All generations enjoy singing and there are a lot of places where you can sing like karaokes and singing pubs.
5. What are the most popular types of films in your country?
Romantic comedy genre is the most popular in South Korea since Korean like a love story so many drama and films contain a love story.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Hyeon!
Here are tonight\'s suggestion to make your answer said in different degrees of its the same thought. Go over them and see you in class tomorrow.
Well done!
-T. Donna
Yes, absolutely. I was completely into singing songs when I was a teenager. At least, I went to a karaoke every other day.
>> Correct! Or: ... I went to the Karaoke at least every other day.
2. How often do you sing now?
I usually go to a karaoke when I want to sing a song as it is allowed to make noise there. But I hum every day at home or a private place.
>> allows
3. Do you have a favorite song you like listening to?;Definitely, my favorite song is ‘ shallow’ which is the movie OST of “A Star is bone”. Main actors Bradly cooper and lady gaga sing it in the film;
>> Definitely, my favorite song is \" Shallow\" which is the movie OST of “A Star is Born”. The main actors Bradly Cooper and Lady Gaga sang it in the film.
4. How important is singing in your culture? I think singing is a paramount entertainment in South Korea. All generations enjoy singing and there are a lot of places where you can sing like karaokes and singing pubs.
>> Correct!
5. What are the most popular types of films in your country?
Romantic comedy genre is the most popular in South Korea since Korean like a love story so many drama and films contain a love story.
>> Romantic comedy genre is the most popular in South Korea since Koreans like love story so many drama and films contain a love story. (..theme is love)
6. What is the difference between watching a film in the cinema and watching a film at home?
In terms of advantages of both places, you can experience a vivid image and a magnificent sound through a wide and large screen in the cinema. On the other hand, you can watch a film lying on the sofa comfortably and talk with other people who watch it together at home.
so I can describe them in a word respectively. watching a film in the cinema is for quality and at home for free or comfortable.
>> In terms of the advantages of both places, you can experience a vivid image and a magnificent sound through a wide and large screen in the cinema. On the other hand, you can watch a film lying on the sofa comfortably and talking with other people who are watching it together with you at home.
So I can describe them in two ways: watching a film in the cinema is for quality and at home for comfort.
7. Do you think cinemas will close in the future?
I don’t think so. Most cinemas have been changed to follow trends and attract customers. for example, one cinema is decorated like a garden or forest. you can lay on a comfortable seat and the decoration makes you feel like you are watching a film in the garden or forest.
Also, the movie theater is not just a place to watch a film, but a place to date and enjoy leisure
>> I don’t think so. Most cinemas have been changed(catered) to follow trends and attract customers. For example, a cinema is decorated like a garden or forest. You can lay on a comfortable seat and the decoration makes you feel like you are watching a film in the garden or forest.
Also, the movie theater is not just a place to watch a film, but a place to have a date and enjoy leisure.
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