ielts part 1
학생이 쓴 원문
I live in Daejeon. Daejeon is located in the middle of Korea. So it takes about 4 hours to reach anywhere in Korea by KTX. KTX is Korea express train. Daejeon is good for living because it has many parks and convenient transportation.
I have been living in my apartment for five years. Living in an apartment is convenient because I don\'t have to repair something for myself. And the low maintenance fee is good. But sometimes upstairs noise is uncomfortable.
I usually wear jeans. There are some reasons. It is very convenient for activity. Also, it is easy for matching any clothes and any colors. Therefore many people like wearing jeans.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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>>> correct
Daejeon is located in the middle of Korea.
>>> correct
So it takes about 4 hours to reach anywhere in Korea by KTX.
>>> correct
KTX is Korea express train.
>>> KTX is Korea\'s express train.
Daejeon is good for living because it has many parks and convenient transportation.
>>> correct
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I have been living in my apartment for five years.
>>> correct
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I have been living in my apartment for five years.
>>> correct
Living in an apartment is convenient because I don\'t have to repair something for myself.
>>> Living in an apartment is convenient because I don\'t have to repair something by myself.
And the low maintenance fee is good.
>>> correct
But sometimes upstairs noise is uncomfortable.
>>> correct
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I usually wear jeans.
I usually wear jeans.
>>> correct
There are some reasons.
>>> correct
It is very convenient for activity.
>>> correct
Also, it is easy for matching any clothes and any colors.
>>> Also, it is easy to match with any clothes and any colors.
Therefore many people like wearing jeans.
>>> Therefore, many people like wearing jeans.
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