ielts part 2
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe a leisure activity you do with your family.
My family’ hobby is riding a bicycle.
We usually ride to GabCheon Park on Saturday.
It has a bike lane, a large lawn and a playground, so we like there.
Seeing the beautiful flowers and trees and drinking fresh air also relieves stress.
Sit on the lawn, eat some snacks or fruits, and sometimes play on the play ground.
The time that the family enjoys together is so pleasant and precious.
Describe something useful you borrowed
I’ll talk about the recently borrowed coffee machine.
My sister did a medical checkup, and the doctor told her to stop coffee for a while.
So I borrowed my sister’s coffee machine.
It’s great to have a cup of coffee every morning with a coffee machine.
I drank latte yesterday, and today Americano.
And the house is like a café. The aroma of coffee is very good.
강사 첨삭
I’ll talk about the recently borrowed coffee machine.
>>> correct
My sister did a medical checkup, and the doctor told her to stop coffee for a while.
My sister did a medical checkup, and the doctor told her to stop coffee for a while.
>>> My sister did a medical checkup, and the doctor told her to stop drinking coffee for a while.
So I borrowed my sister’s coffee machine.
>>> correct
It’s great to have a cup of coffee every morning with a coffee machine.
It’s great to have a cup of coffee every morning with a coffee machine.
>>> correct
I drank latte yesterday, and today Americano.
I drank latte yesterday, and today Americano.
>>> correct
And the house is like a cafe.
And the house is like a cafe.
>>> correct
The aroma of coffee is very good.
>>> correct
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