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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Sir or Madam
I was one of the guest at your hotel from the 1th july to 15th and my room number was 2321
I am writing to report that i have lost my important papers at the hotel.
first of all, I think my papers are on the table, because I was reading papers at the table.
suddenly my colleague who stayed another room called me. so I went out to meet my colleague.
when I came back housekeeper has cleaned my room.at that moment, I didn\'t realize that
but I realized as soon as when I arrived home.
The paper is that document for contract in 3days later. It is really hard for my company to contract without document
therefore I would be very grateful, if you could send me my paper to the above address as soon as when you find
my address is unit 502, 28king street .
if you have any question, please don\'t hesitate to call me at 0403 009 571 and you can also contact me
through mail at [이메일]
I very much look forward to receiving your prompt reply
your faithfully
Ki[이름] [이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! It\'s so great to see you here.
This is a very well written letter. I understood clearly what happened to the incident about the contract and how you have to have it back urgently.
I hope to read again from you soon. Excellent job!
See you in class in a few minutes.
-T. Donna =)
>> Dear Sir/Madam:
I was one of the guest at your hotel from the 1th july to 15th and my room number was 2321
I was one of the guest at your hotel from the 1th july to 15th and my room number was 2321
>> I was one of the guests at your hotel from the 1st of July to 15th and my room number was 2321.
I am writing to report that i have lost my important papers at the hotel.
I am writing to report that i have lost my important papers at the hotel.
>> I am writing to report that I have lost my important papers at the hotel.
first of all, I think my papers are on the table, because I was reading papers at the table.
suddenly my colleague who stayed another room called me. so I went out to meet my colleague.
when I came back housekeeper has cleaned my room.at that moment, I didn\'t realize that
but I realized as soon as when I arrived home.
first of all, I think my papers are on the table, because I was reading papers at the table.
suddenly my colleague who stayed another room called me. so I went out to meet my colleague.
when I came back housekeeper has cleaned my room.at that moment, I didn\'t realize that
but I realized as soon as when I arrived home.
>> First of all, I think my papers are on the table because I was reading them at the table.
Suddenly, my colleague who stayed in another room called me. So I went out to meet my colleague/(him).
When I came back, the housekeeper has cleaned my room. At that moment, I didn\'t realize that
but I realized it as soon as I arrived home.
The paper is that document for contract in 3days later. It is really hard for my company to contract without document
Suddenly, my colleague who stayed in another room called me. So I went out to meet my colleague/(him).
When I came back, the housekeeper has cleaned my room. At that moment, I didn\'t realize that
but I realized it as soon as I arrived home.
The paper is that document for contract in 3days later. It is really hard for my company to contract without document
>> The paper is a document for contract 3 days later. It is really hard for my company to seal a contract without a document.
therefore I would be very grateful, if you could send me my paper to the above address as soon as when you find
my address is unit 502, 28king street .
therefore I would be very grateful, if you could send me my paper to the above address as soon as when you find
my address is unit 502, 28king street .
>> Therefore, I would be very grateful if you could send me my paper to the above address as soon as you find it.
My address once again is unit 502, 28 King Street.
if you have any question, please don\'t hesitate to call me at 0403 009 571 and you can also contact me
through mail at [이메일]
My address once again is unit 502, 28 King Street.
if you have any question, please don\'t hesitate to call me at 0403 009 571 and you can also contact me
through mail at [이메일]
>> If you have any question, please don\'t hesitate to call me at 0403 009 571 and you can also contact me
through e-mail at [이메일].
I very much look forward to receiving your prompt reply
through e-mail at [이메일].
I very much look forward to receiving your prompt reply
>> I look forward very much to receiving your prompt reply.
your faithfully
your faithfully
>> Respectfully,
Ki[이름] [이름]
Ki[이름] [이름]
>> Correct!
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