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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Sir or Madam
I was one of the student at your school and my identification number was EAE232
I am writing to give a feedback about course what i did
first of all, I really enjoyed your course because, I was always interested in cookery.
The cookery course was really meaningful time that i did, for example, we made a number of Thai food,
that was what i have ever not done before , it made me possible to deal with exotic ingredients.
currently, I have had a confident about cooking ,since i started cookery course.
now, I am a chef in Thai restaurant , i am cooking all day at the my restaurant.
It could attribute what i got a job to your course.
If a new course such as western course is offered, at that moment, i would like to have a class .
Recently, The more I cook the Thai food , The more I wanted to know about new ingredient.
If you have any question, please don\'t hesitate to call me at 0111-55-55
I very look forward to receiving your reply
repectfully,
ki[이름] [이름]
강사 첨삭
A great start of the week [이름]!
This is a very well done composition once again. You used precise words to describe how the course was very meaningful and helpful to you.
I suggest that you add more reasons for the school to add or consider another course as it ill be their point of reference on why they need to offer the course.
I will give an example in class later when I see you. Enjoy your day!
-T. Donna =)
>> Dear Sir/Madam:
I was one of the student at your school and my identification number was EAE232
I am writing to give a feedback about course what i did
I was one of the student at your school and my identification number was EAE232
I am writing to give a feedback about course what i did
>> I was one of the students at your school and my identification number was EAE232.
I am writing to give a feedback about the course that I took.
I am writing to give a feedback about the course that I took.
first of all, I really enjoyed your course because, I was always interested in cookery.
The cookery course was really meaningful time that i did, for example, we made a number of Thai food,
that was what i have ever not done before , it made me possible to deal with exotic ingredients.
>> First of all, I really enjoyed my course because I was always interested in cookery.
The cookery course was really a meaningful time that I did. For example, we made a number of Thai food
that I have ever not done before. It made me possible to deal with exotic ingredients.
currently, I have had a confident about cooking ,since i started cookery course.
now, I am a chef in Thai restaurant , i am cooking all day at the my restaurant.
It could attribute what i got a job to your course.
>> Currently, I have have confidence about cooking since I started my cookery course.
Now, as I am a chef in a Thai restaurant, am cooking all day.
I can attribute my job to my course.
If a new course such as western course is offered, at that moment, i would like to have a class .
Recently, The more I cook the Thai food , The more I wanted to know about new ingredient.
Now, as I am a chef in a Thai restaurant, am cooking all day.
I can attribute my job to my course.
If a new course such as western course is offered, at that moment, i would like to have a class .
Recently, The more I cook the Thai food , The more I wanted to know about new ingredient.
>> If a new course such as western cuisine is offered, I would like to have a class with you again.
Recently, the more I cook thai food, the more I wanted to know about new ingredients.
If you have any question, please don\'t hesitate to call me at 0111-55-55
Recently, the more I cook thai food, the more I wanted to know about new ingredients.
If you have any question, please don\'t hesitate to call me at 0111-55-55
>> Correct! (Put period at the end of the sentence.)
I very look forward to receiving your reply
>> Correct! (Put period at the end of the sentence.)
I very look forward to receiving your reply
>> Correct! (Put period at the end of the sentence.)
repectfully,
>> Respectfully,
ki[이름] [이름]
ki[이름] [이름]
>> Ki[이름] [이름]
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