ielts taks 1
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Sir/Madam
I am one of the people who organised a meeting on the 4th October. I am writing to complain that we were served for lunch during the meeting.
However, There were a few things that the participants liked about the hotel. for example,
Where the meeting was held was quite wide and very fantastic. Moreover, who helped our meeting and served food were very kind. So most participants are saticefied about the hotel service. I also thought like that, Before serving food.
There were people who had a special dietary about prawns.
Obviously, I remember that we had a short meeting about the participant’s dietary.
But, Somehow, They received food including prawn. It was a really terrible accident.
So. I would like to suggest to improve your food,I think you had better when you talk with kitchen departement about customer’s special dietary, It would be help to reduce a accident like this.
If you have any further question, please don’t hesitate to call me at 00000
Respectfully,
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
You were able to meet the demands of the task. Very good, well crafted letter!
See you later in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: Add a comma at the end of Madam
I am one of the people who organised a meeting on the 4th October. I am writing to complain that we were served for lunch during the meeting.
I am one of the people who organised a meeting on the 4th October. I am writing to complain that we were served for lunch during the meeting.
>> I am one of the people who organized a meeting on the 4th October. I am writing to complain what we were served for lunch during the meeting.
However, There were a few things that the participants liked about the hotel. for example,
Where the meeting was held was quite wide and very fantastic. Moreover, who helped our meeting and served food were very kind. So most participants are saticefied about the hotel service. I also thought like that, Before serving food.
However, There were a few things that the participants liked about the hotel. for example,
Where the meeting was held was quite wide and very fantastic. Moreover, who helped our meeting and served food were very kind. So most participants are saticefied about the hotel service. I also thought like that, Before serving food.
>> However, there were a few things that the participants liked about the hotel. For example,
the venue where the meeting was held was quite wide and very fantastic. Moreover, the one who helped our meeting and served food were very kind. So most participants are satisfied about the hotel service. I also thought that way before serving food.
There were people who had a special dietary about prawns.
Obviously, I remember that we had a short meeting about the participant’s dietary.
But, Somehow, They received food including prawn. It was a really terrible accident.
There were people who had a special dietary about prawns.
Obviously, I remember that we had a short meeting about the participant’s dietary.
But, Somehow, They received food including prawn. It was a really terrible accident.
>> There were people who had a special dietary allergy about prawns.
Obviously, I remember that we had a short meeting about the participant’s dietary.
But somehow, they received food including prawn. It was a really terrible accident.
So. I would like to suggest to improve your food,I think you had better when you talk with kitchen departement about customer’s special dietary, It would be help to reduce a accident like this.
Obviously, I remember that we had a short meeting about the participant’s dietary.
But somehow, they received food including prawn. It was a really terrible accident.
So. I would like to suggest to improve your food,I think you had better when you talk with kitchen departement about customer’s special dietary, It would be help to reduce a accident like this.
>> So. I would like to suggest to improve your food service. I think you had better food when you talked with the kitchen department about customer’s special dietary. It would help reduce incidents like this.
If you have any further question, please don’t hesitate to call me at 00000
If you have any further question, please don’t hesitate to call me at 00000
>> Correct! Add period at the end of the sentence.
Respectfully,
Respectfully,
>> Correct!
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