Ielts task1:After a recent holiday to a hotel, you realized that you have left a few items that you
학생이 쓴 원문
- Give details of the items
- Say where you left them
- Say what would you like to the manager to do
Dear Madam or Sir,
I am [이름] Choi and i had stayed in your hotel with my husband during our summer holiday.I am writing to ask if you could do me a favor. It seems that i have left my bag and laptop in your hotel room. My room was 301 and we stayed there from 28th August to 2nd September.
My bag is a middle white and red fabric bag and it contains a black diary and a pair of blue sneakers. Also my laptop is a silver MacBook with a sticker of Avengers Logo on it.
I guess that the bag was in the closet and the laptop was on the round wooden table in the room. These are very important for me. Please check it for me.
If you find my items, could you give them to my friend? My friend’s name is Sally who is going to go to your hotel on 6th September. I look forforward to your quick reply and thank you in advance.
Your faithfully,
[이름] Choi
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Monday!
Here are my corrections.
Dear Madam or Sir,
>>Dear Madam/Sir,
I am [이름] Choi and i had stayed in your hotel with my husband during our summer holiday.I am writing to ask if you could do me a favor.
I am [이름] Choi and i had stayed in your hotel with my husband during our summer holiday.I am writing to ask if you could do me a favor.
>>I am [이름] Choi and I had stayed in your hotel with my husband during our summer holiday. I am writing to ask if you could do me a favor.
It seems that i have left my bag and laptop in your hotel room. My room was 301 and we stayed there from 28th August to 2nd September.
>>It seems that I have left my bag and my laptop in your hotel room. My room was 301 and we stayed there from the 28th of August to the 2nd day of September.
My bag is a middle white and red fabric bag and it contains a black diary and a pair of blue sneakers. Also my laptop is a silver MacBook with a sticker of Avengers Logo on it.
>>My bag has white at the middle and has red fabrics. It contains a black diary and a pair of blue sneakers. Also, my laptop is a silver Mac Book with a sticker of Avengers Logo on it.
I guess that the bag was in the closet and the laptop was on the round wooden table in the room. These are very important for me. Please check it for me.
I guess that the bag was in the closet and the laptop was on the round wooden table in the room. These are very important for me. Please check it for me.
>>Correct!
If you find my items, could you give them to my friend? My friend’s name is Sally who is going to go to your hotel on 6th September.
>>If you find my items, could you give them to my friend? My friend’s name is Sally who is going to your hotel on the 6th of September.
I look forforward to your quick reply and thank you in advance.
>>I look will look forward to your quick reply and thank you in advance.
Your faithfully,
[이름] Choi
Your faithfully,
[이름] Choi
>>Faithfully,
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