IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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Teacher Jean

Dear [Name]

>> Dear [Name],

 I am glad to writing this letter for you. 

>> Hope you are doing great.

 I am planning to go to language school in Australia soon.

>>  I am planning to go to a language school in Australia soon.

In addition, I am going to study diploma of nursing. After that, I prefer to get a job as a nurse.

>>Also, I\'m going to study diploma of nursing and then maybe get a job there as a nurse .

While I study language school, I want to know that work in your workplace is available.

>> I wonder if there are any job vacancies at your workplace as I plan to have a part-time job while studying at the language school.

 Recently I have seen hire advertisement on your facebook timeline, if you are still looking for a waitress.

>> Recently, I have seen job advertisements on your Facebook timeline. Is the waitress post still available?

 I am not sure I can finish job interview completely.

>> I am not sure if I can finish the job interview. [not exactly sure what you want to say here.]

If you know any site to look for job seeking, please share that information. 

>> Do you mind sharing any job posting sites that you know?

 Unfortunately, my parents could not support that all school fees, so I believe that I can get a part-time job.

>> Unfortunately, my parents cannot afford to fully support my tuition fee so I think that I need to get a part-time job.

 I hope that you could tell employer and get a job interview as soon as possible.

>> I hope that you can help me get a job interview at your workplace as soon as possible. 

 If you have any inquiry, please send email or call my mobile number please.
>> Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

 Love XXX

>> Love,

 [이름]

>> [이름] xxx