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i have 3 days for vacation, i want to do need things to me.
That\'s three things. First, i\'m going to clean up my home and i\'ll buy a blanket and a pillow.
Second, i\'ll go to the grandmother\'s home.
Last day, i\'m going to go back home and watch the \'Before sunrise\'.
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Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework. ^^
I appreciate you for sharing your thoughts about it.
I hope that you\'ll be able to spend this kind of vacation in the near future. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> If I have 3 days for vacation, I want to do the things I need to do.
>> Or: If I have 3 days of vacation, I want to do the necessary things that I must to do.
That\'s three things.
That\'s three things.
>> There are three things.
First, i\'m going to clean up my home and i\'ll buy a blanket and a pillow.
>> CORRECT.
Second, i\'ll go to the grandmother\'s home.
Second, i\'ll go to the grandmother\'s home.
>> Second, I\'ll go to my grandmother\'s home.
Last day, i\'m going to go back home and watch the \'Before sunrise\'.
Last day, i\'m going to go back home and watch the \'Before sunrise\'.
>> On the last day, I\'m going to go back home and watch \'Before sunrise\'.
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