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i were going to a deserted island, i going to take a camel, a tent and water spray.
Because, a camel is the best of traffic in deserted island, And there is quite cold outside at night.
Finally, water spray can effective consume water.
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>> If I am going to to a deserted island, I\'m going to take a camel, a tent and a water spray.
Because, a camel is the best of traffic in deserted island, And there is quite cold outside at night.
Because, a camel is the best of traffic in deserted island, And there is quite cold outside at night.
>> It is because camel is the best mode of transportation in a deserted island and it is quite cold outside at night.
Finally, water spray can effective consume water.
Finally, water spray can effective consume water.
>> Finally, water spray can be an effective way to consume water.
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