If

2019-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

you make friends, You would make a bond of sympathy. And you will share a lot of emotions and be happy with your friends.

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for making your homework.

I agree about your answer and it\'s indeed one of the great reasons why we should have friends. ^^

~Teacher Gina

If you make friends, you would make a bond of sympathy.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: Making friends would make you share your feeling to each other.

And you will share a lot of emotions and be happy with your friends.

>> CORRECT.

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