If a Blackout in My City...
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If there\'s a blackout in my city for 48 hours, maybe I will read the fantasy books. I used to have time to read e-books, but it takes a lot of time. So I can\'t do it often, for that reason, if given the time I will do that. Also, I will watch the downloaded drama or movie. It\'s help to pass time so fast, too. For the sake of the environment, I really wish there would be a blackout in my city at least once, anyway.
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Hi Kate!
I enjoyed this composition today.
It\'s very light and clear.
It\'s also easy to read and understand.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If there\'s a blackout in my city for 48 hours, maybe I will read the fantasy books.
>> If there\'s a blackout in my city for 48 hours, maybe I will read fantasy books.
I used to have time to read e-books, but it takes a lot of time.
>> I used to have time to read e-books, but it took a lot of time.
So I can\'t do it often, for that reason, if given the time I will do that.
>> So I can\'t do it often and for that reason, if given the time, I will do that.
Also, I will watch the downloaded drama or movie.
>> Also, I will watch downloaded shows or movies.
It\'s help to pass time so fast, too.
>> It will help pass the time, too.
For the sake of the environment, I really wish there would be a blackout in my city at least once, anyway.
>> Correct
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