If a company sells the public a product they know to be harmful or addictive, should they be held re
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Hi there again Sir [이름] ^^
Happy weekend to you!
I even don\'t know who should we blame.
I agree ith you they should be responsible.
Anyway, thank you for your time.
I hope that you are taking enough rest.
Can\'t wait to hear your ideas again.
Teacher Nina
Although companies mainly exist for making money and distributing their profit to their stakeholders, they should also take their social responsibilities.
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Not all the companies develop, manufacture, and sell goods that are valuable and beneficial to the public.
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Some companies market and sell products that are unarguably detrimental to the people such as Tabaco companies.
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Alcohol, gambling, and online games are typical products that are controversial whether they are more harmful and addictive than paly a positive role for the society.
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All those controversial products are on the markets after being approved by the governments.
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It seems that no one cares for public’s health.
>> It seems that no one cares for the public\'s health/
This is the reality in this modern society.
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Which company can we blame under the situation where even the government is directly running such businesses like casino and Tabaco.
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>> OR: Which company can we blame under the situation where even the government is directly running such businesses like casino and Tabaco?
That’s why companies’ ethics and social responsibilities cannot be emphasized too strongly.
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