If a company sells the public a product they know to be harmful or addictive, should they be held re

2015-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Companies’ social responsibility can’t be too emphasized. Although they all go through the processes in accordance with regulations to sell their products such as passing tests on their harmful effects and getting approval from the authorities, it doesn’t mean that they are free from all the side-effects or the aftermath of their profit pursuing practice. Regulations are a minimum level of means to protect the public’s health and benefits. Regulations can’t guarantee that all the products we consume or use are actually safe and beneficial. Due to the complexity and different interests by each group in our society, the government can’t intervene in all of the businesses that should be settled between producers and consumers. There are too many products that could be considered potential threats to the public’s health or interests such as cola, alcohols, Tabaco, gambling, and lotteries. However, they have both good and bad effects. Customers should be discreet in purchasing.

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Companies’ social responsibility can’t be too emphasized.

>> correct

Although they all go through the processes in accordance with regulations to sell their products such as passing tests on their harmful effects and getting approval from the authorities, it doesn’t mean that they are free from all the side-effects or the aftermath of their profit pursuing practice.

>> correct

Regulations are a minimum level of means to protect the public’s health and benefits.

>> correct

Regulations can’t guarantee that all the products we consume or use are actually safe and beneficial.

>> correct

Due to the complexity and different interests by each group in our society, the government can’t intervene in all of the businesses that should be settled between producers and consumers.

>> correct

There are too many products that could be considered potential threats to the public’s health or interests such as cola, alcohols, Tabaco, gambling, and lotteries.

>> correct

However, they have both good and bad effects.

>> correct

Customers should be discreet in purchasing.

>> correct

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