If a genie granted you three wishes right now, what would you wish for?
학생이 쓴 원문
If a genie granted you three wishes right now, what would you wish for?
First, the ability to move one\'s mind
Because I want to live normally, I need that sometimes. For example, part-time job interview, loan screening, human relation.. If I get this ability, I will use suitable moment.
Second, healthy life
Not only on the outside, but also on the inside, I aim for a healthy life. This wish includes nice body line that anyone can make by exercising and healthy mental.
Last wish is a full account balance. I heard one story. Money is directly relative with happiness until one hundred million. But story is just story. My dream job is a rich Baeksu. that meaning is no worker.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Cathy! Thank you for this wonderful composition. I hope all your wishes would be granted.
Enjoy your morning. See you later! ^_^
-Avery
First, the ability to move one\'s mind
>> First, I would wish for the ability to move one\'s mind.
Because I want to live normally, I need that sometimes.
>> CORRECT
For example, part-time job interview, loan screening, human relation..
>> For example, this ability will be useful in various situations such as having a part-time job interview, loan screening, and building human relations.
If I get this ability, I will use suitable moment.
>> If I get this ability, I will use it for suitable moments.
Second, healthy life
>> Second, I will ask for a healthy life.
Not only on the outside, but also on the inside, I aim for a healthy life.
>> CORRECT
This wish includes nice body line that anyone can make by exercising and healthy mental.
>> This wish includes having nice body curves that anyone can achieve by exercising and having a good mental health.
Last wish is a full account balance.
>> My last wish is to have a full account balance.
I heard one story.
>> CORRECT
Money is directly relative with happiness until one hundred million.
>> CORRECT
But story is just story.
>> However, a story is just a story.
My dream job is a rich Baeksu. that meaning is no worker.
>> My dream job is to become a rich Baeksu.
that meaning is no worker.
>> That means I don\'t have to work anymore.
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