If a genie granted you three wishes right now, what would you wish for?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am dreaming of living in the house which has a beautiful view such as mountain, beach or river in the middle of city. First of all, I will ask genie to give me a luxury apartment. Secondly, I want to have a luxury car which is covered with gold. I have seen this car in the UAE and has a unique number plate. I was parked in front of hotel in Abu Dahbi city. I guess that this car owned by one of the royal family. Lastly, I wish having a strong body like body-builder even though I don\'t do any exercise and control my meals. Because it is one of the fantasy for men. If I have a strong body, I will take a profile photo in the studio.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Mr. [이름]! Thanks for sharing these wishes. I hope they all come true. ^^
Enjoy your Tuesday, Sir. I\'ll see you soon! ^_^
-Avery
I am dreaming of living in the house which has a beautiful view such as mountain, beach or river in the middle of city.
>> I am dreaming of living in a house which has a beautiful view such as mountain, beach or river in the middle of the city.
First of all, I will ask genie to give me a luxury apartment.
>> CORRECT
Secondly, I want to have a luxury car which is covered with gold.
>> CORRECT
I have seen this car in the UAE and has a unique number plate.
>> I have seen this car in the UAE and it had a unique number plate.
I was parked in front of hotel in Abu Dahbi city.
>> CORRECT
I guess that this car owned by one of the royal family.
>> I guess that this car was owned by one of the royal family.
Lastly, I wish having a strong body like body-builder even though I don\'t do any exercise and control my meals.
>> Lastly, I wish having a strong body like that of a body-builder even though I don\'t do any exercise nor do I control my meals.
Because it is one of the fantasy for men.
>> This is part of my wish list because it is one of the fantasies of men.
If I have a strong body, I will take a profile photo in the studio.
>> CORRECT
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