If a pregnant woman and an old lady are standing on a subway, to whom will you offer your seat?
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I guess we shouldn\'t sit on the priority seats provided for pregnant women and old people on the subway. By the way, why do have to ask someone to give up his/her seat where you can offer yours? Ha! Ha! Ha! See you!
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It is difficult to know who are the old ladies when I see somebody.
>>> Correct!
OR: It is difficult to identify who are the old ladies at first glance.
We can hurt people by offer our seat, because he or she is not enough old.
>>> We can hurt people by offering our seats, because he or she might not old enough.
They might feel upset or embarrassed when we offer the seat.
>>> Correct!
If a woman is obesity, there has been same situation can be happened.
>>> If a woman is obese, the same situation might happen.
Anyway, If I found a pregnant woman and old lady, I would ask somebody who is next to my seat to offer his/her seat to them who are standing in front of us.
>>> Anyway, if I found a pregnant woman and an old lady, I would ask somebody next to my seat to offer his/her seat to them who are standing in front of us.
I think it is the best way I can provide.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: I think it is the best way I can help them.
However, If person doesn\'t want to offer his seat, I would rater give my seat to a pregnant woman, because I know how she has been a hard time while she is in pregnancy.
>>>> However, if a person doesn\'t want to offer his seat, I would rather give my seat to a pregnant woman, because I know how she has been in a hard time while pregnant.
We can easily see old people to force us giving our seat.
>>> We can easily see old people forcing us to give up our seats for them.
Old people think it is their divine right, but I don\'t agree with that.
>>> Correct!
Because they don\'t usually care about the condition of people that forced to offer their seat.
>>> Because they don\'t usually care about the condition of people that were forced to offer their seat.
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